Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Story Writing (Carribean Pirate)

Story Writing

Once upon a time, there was a pirate named Jack Sparrow who was very greedy. He was traveling with 112 crews aboard. He was traveling in the ship called the Blue Pearl in the Caribbean Sea.

Another pirate named Alex was also traveling in the Caribbean Sea in his ship named Green Lotus. Jack Sparrow stole his ship, Blue Pearl. Alex was ready to take revenge from him. Somehow, they both got sight of each other and were ready to fight. The strategy of Jack Sparrow was this that some of his crews stayed in their position in their own ship to bombard Alex’s ship while others jumped into the enemy’s ship. Alex also commanded some of his crews to jump into Jack Sparrows ship while other defended the attack of Jack Sparrow. They both fought non-stop and badly.

Suddenly a storm struck in between them and Jack Sparrow quickly sailed his ship but as he looked back, he saw Alex’s ship was coming behind him. He was surprised that how he had escaped but then, Blue Pearl cast a curse on Green Lotus and it was slowly breaking. Then Alex commanded his crews to quickly bombard Blue Lotus before it could drown. They promptly obeyed his command and headed forward to bombard the enemy’s ship. Finally the Blue Pearl was knocked down into the sea.

The curse of the Blue Pearl was then over and then Alex took his revenge and not that only, he also became the most dangerous pirate of the Caribbean Sea. All his crews shouted in excitement and Alex was also happy and finally said:

“ I am the most dangerous pirate of the Caribbean Sea. Ha! Ha! Ha!”

By: Arsal SiddiqClass: VII Silver

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